I wrote this song for my girlfriend, because one night when I was waiting for her to call me when she got off work, she was all that I could think about, so I started writing this, so if you could give me some feedback, that would be great!
I would walk through frozen tundra I would climb the highest mountains I would walk through brim and fire Just to hold you in my arms
I will shout your name to the ends of the Earth I will proclaim your name to the heavens I will search for your beauty forever I will love you always and forever
Your beauty radiating like the sun Your hair as soft as a puppies fur You are my world You are my sun Without you I am none
I would walk to the ends of the earth just to be with you You are my everything You are my anything I love you Please stay when I'm gone
Stick around for the ride Love me to the end It's coming fast
Soon enough I'll be back in your arms 4 years past Back for good
Stay, Wait, I will come back to your arms I love you The ride has just begun It is time for the adventure to start
Great idea great voice in the song, but try using more word variety. it's been a while since I've written a song myself but your inspiration and meaning show through clearly.
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I usually ask the girl where she wants to go and try to create something based on that. Typical stuff, dinner, maybe a movie, bowling. Ideally I would give her a short kiss goodnight if things went well but that's the most. I wouldn't push for too much more.
Afterwards..what will your date know about you?
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