your smile lights up my world
But your laugh got me
I'm falling now but don't know
if i'll land on my feet
Your long smooth legs enticing
But your voice, got me
I'm still falling but i don't care where i land
as long as i got you
Can you rate a poem I wrote for a very special lady? Do you think she will like it?
What Girls Said 5
I would be extremely flattered if a guy took the time to write a poem about me.. that is very sweet!!1
Nuuuuuuuuu awwweee anyways I think it's sweet. Good luck :)1
The thought is really sweet. Good luck.0
What Guys Said 2
there are a few grammar mistakes - but I'm not going to correct it like a grammar nazi.
It shouldn't have to be unless you are native English speaker anyway.
I think it's a great poem and I think that if she's the intellectual type that likes reading and poetry she'll be very very happy with it.0
How well she likes it depends on how well she likes you. If she has no feelings for you, then the poem won't change anything. If she already likes you, then she will like the poem.0
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