Girls, would this touch you heart?

This a poem about my feelings toward a woman I want to date and even marry.

To my love who I love so dear.
My greatest desire is to hold you near.
When you are in my arms safe and sound.
I can feel the happy thoughts starting to mound.
When you kiss me upon my lips.
I feel my whole being upon a great big ship.
Sailing towards a new chapter of my life.
My love do not fear.
For I am here to hold you near.
My love do not be afraid to fall.
For I am here to help you stand tall
My love do not be afraid to cry.
For I am here to help you get by.
My love do not be afraid to get mad.
For I know it’s because you are sad.
Your beauty pleases my heart.
Your embrace has given me a new start.
When you’re gone I feel so sad.
I feel like everything has become bad.
Being without you has taken a very bad toll.
This sadness has blackened my soul.
Return to me and let your kiss be upon my cheek.
For only it can guide me back to that which I seek.
Oh how I need you in my life.
Your love will relieve the strife.
Things have gotten better since you came here.
For you have taken away all my fears.
My love I will love you till the day I die.
And it’s because of you that I am no longer shy.
As I lay in bed at night.
I think about how your love has brought me.
From the darkness to the light.


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Most Helpful Girl

  • Omg!!! That is beautiful I love it 😉

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    • Thank you for saying I am the most helpful 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
      Best of Luck with that special lady

    • Thank you for your input. I wanted to see if my words had the power to touch a woman's heart. It seems i do.

What Girls Said 4

  • damn! that's sweet

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  • Yes, it is a great poem.👌👌👌👍😊😊

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  • It's sweet. Some of it was a bit repetitive and there are some parts that might be better left out or revised, but on an emotional level it's good. It's really sweet. On a literature level, it's good but needs some tweaking.

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  • It's no John Keats, but it's sweet nevertheless.

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