Please, for the love of all things creative, make the poem up yourself. Even if its bad, I think the girl you are trying to impress will love you until Kingdom come. Especially if she's a literature junkie like myself. I've had guys try to impress me with a poem off the internet and i just found it deceitful. So if you wrote it yourself and your girl is not going to find it on the interwebs, then yesh. (:
That is a reason to drop them. And my response to the home would read on this website, "are guys who give you bull shit always bull shit artists and they are just practicing on you or are they really just people who have their act together and bull sitting since they think they know it all.."
They're terrible usually, so I just feel bad for them. Also - why can't you see it's that bad? I know you might be subjective in it, but if you don't know what good art is... maybe you shouldn't attempt it.
if I love him, I think the light shines out of his ass and anything he would write for I'd find super sweet... Rarely happens though, so unless the poem is really good it would make me feel a bit awkward. having said that I myself have written love poems, but I never sent them to the person, it was more of a way to express my feelings, since I couldn't do it to their face..