Hi, I'm Andrew. How's it going? I saw you mention that you are learning to play guitar. That's awesome! I've actually been playing for 11 years. I'm pretty intrigued by what I've read about you in your profile and would enjoy getting to know you better.
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looks pretty good, id love a message like that. it stands out from the hundreds of "hi" "hi how are u" "hey sexy" "hey read your profile, wanna meet up?" "hey you want my dick?" <-- literally had this a lot lol
i would elaborate on the "intrigued by what I read on your profile" bit, add a few examples so like I was pretty intrigued by what I read on your profile especially the part about ...how much you love animals and have a pet of your own... or how you like to go fishing on weekends, you sound really fun and outdoorsy! just so the woman knows you haven't just skim read her profile like a lot of guys do.
that is the kind of message I would reply to, its nice and polite, doesn't involve anything heavy or dirty which is an instant turn off (slimeball alert! lol) and shows you took the time to get to know a bit about me from my profile instead of seeing I'm female and firing off a two letter message then moving on to the next female profile. the next thing id check is your profile so make sure its informative and shows your personality, make sure your photo is a nice one of you smiling not one of you with your shirt off or drunk or smoking0