I made another account just to ask this question.
A few days ago, a thought popped into my head. That thought became a phrase which eventually became a song. If anyone is willing to proofread my lyrics and critique it, please message me!! I wrote it in about 15 minutes and normally when that happens it's either a really good song or a really bad song.
Please message me!
Today was awful, just like yesterday
Made some picture perfect memories
Sang a song too long to remember our last days
but remembered why we parted ways.
Under the sweet summer air
Thinking of him everywhere
Thinkin of the days to come and...
What we have and should've done
and rememb'ring why we parted ways
That was the start and the end of him
Cause soon he met another girl and said once again
Pleasure to meet you, how have you been
Too bad I came at the wrong time
Too bad I really said Hello
If I could only press rewind and knew how to read his mind,
I would've known he really just meant
Most Helpful Guy
I write songs-- I can't guarantee I'm the greatest in the world, but I'm willing to try and help you out! I play drums, guitar, and bass so if you need help with the instruments feel free to ask about that too.
Granted, I can't send you a message when you are anonymous.1
Most Helpful Girl
My sister's boyfriend is a singer/song writer, producer, etc...
You can send me the song and I can then send it to him for feedback.0