For those who have learned Japanese. How is the haiku I composed?

I've been learning for a while. Here's a haiku I came up with. Please give yours thoughts about it. I'm just a rookie, by the way.
森ああ森
奇怪と変な森.
何があなた秘密?
この人は誰を呼ぶか?


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What Girls Said 1

  • I understand a little bit. It sounds like its pretty good. I believe that you're talking about nature and how you love it, correct? Some Kanji I'm not familiar with. Still learning.

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      Its about a mysterious forest, and someone inside.

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      Ah, okay. Still a really good poem. I know I saw person, forest, etc there. The rest I couldn't pick up on. I have a lot of studying to do.

What Guys Said 1

  • かんじをわかりません

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