Opinions On An Original Song?

It's probably pretty sh*t but I don't know, I don't wanna ask people I know.


https://vid.me/EfNA

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Most Helpful Guy

  • Not my thing, kinda goth like with the synth. But vocals are good.

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    • Thank you :) Yeah, I have a tendency to favour dramatic stuff lol

    • Your voice is beautiful though.

    • Aw, thank you so much! 😊

Most Helpful Girl

  • I like the song a lot. the only thing it starts slow - I would move the main theme of the song to the front a little more cause somebody who doesn't know you as a musician might not take the time to wait for the song to start and might move on to the next video early on.

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What Guys Said 2

  • I wish there was some sort of counter melody and more chord structure. In Ley-man's terms it's bland and uninteresting.
    The lyrics are alright, but I'm no expert.

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    • Alright, thanks for being honest, I appreciate it!

    • Hope you do well in the future!
      It's always nice to see more and more musicians in the world!

    • Thank you!! Hoping for the best lol

  • hi hello bb

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What Girls Said 1

  • i like it! Good job

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