Does this make the villain in this young adult science fiction story I want to create seem like a pedophile?

I swear I did not do this on purpose. I just now realized this. I plan to have my villain, who is a grown man send a boy a gift on his 16th birthday. The teen does not know where it is from yet. Anyways, the teen is kidnapped by this villain because he sees him as an asset. The story is science fiction. I have not written it yet I'm just plotting. I plan to have the villain graze his hand at the side of the teen's face.


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  • it definitely could send that vibe but if you wrote it to show how the villain only needs him as an asset it should be fine

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  • maybe a little

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  • It's gonna send that message, yea.

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  • if the boy has some power or something yea

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