Most Helpful Girl
Wow that's really deep. I really love it! It tells a story and is really moving. And to think that this was written by a kid... All the more powerful that someone so young could point out the world as it really is and see it from such a different perspective. Truly impressive work. Short, to the point. Has structure... I really like it.0
Most Helpful Guy
I think the last line is what makes it
Before i read that i was like "ehhhh" then i got to the last line and was like "dammmmm thats some powerful shit"
I dont think its one of the best poems I've read but its pretty powerful i guess0