No i don't think so. 1. They're really not the type of shoes you should be wearing considering your age 2. They're casual therefore more sporty looking so wearing them with that dress is not a good idea. Try stilettos they're more fashionable and i think they would look flawless with this dress.
The shoes are too clumpy for a dress like that you need a more delicate styled shoe.
I like those heels but I don't think it fits with the dress, honestly they would look terrific with a black pair of skinny jeans and a golden top with a black blazer. Long necklaces are a great touch. Hope it helps 🤔