Honest opinion on this short poem?

[Anonymous]

I'm going to send this poem to this girl that I care for but is mad at me and,I thought a poem would be nice. This would be my first one.

Here It is.

When I think of beauty I think of you

No other girl can compare to you that is true

Your eyes have that sparkle and, are like the sky wonderful blue

You make my sadness disappear with your beautiful smile simply stunning

That It makes my heart start running.

You will always have a spot in my heart that's how much I care

The pain and,guilt I've caused I can not bear

I hope the day comes where we can be great friends

So we can make up and,have amends.

You look beautiful all the time

You would make being beautiful gulity of a crime.

I haven’t met a person who’s as nice and caring as you.

I Miss the way you feel in my arms when I hug you goodbye.

[FieryRedHeadGrl]

Oh...my...god. I just cried! I totally thought of the guy who hurt me, and if he gave me this poem, I would probably melt. (I shouldn't forgive him, but I know I would). If this girl has a heart and any emotions, she will forgive you if you give her this! I just know it!

[Asker]

I've done so much for her everything I could think off. I mean ya I called her a bitch a few times which I totally regret but I'm so sorry that I did. I just don't know. Do you really think she would forgive me? she just looked at it and didn't say nothing. Sorry for making ya cry I didn't mean that..

[FieryRedHeadGrl]

She might be taking it in. I don't know. Just give her some time. She might not know how she feels about it right now. I'm sure she'll come around and let you know if she forgives you or not.

[Asker]

Guess we'll wait and see ya know.

[Anonymous]

U sounds lovely...hard to tell it's Ur first time ;-). Really cute.

You give to her. She should feel real special.

Good luck.

[Asker]

Think so?

[Opinion Owner]

Yes...I think it's very cute.

And yes she should feel special...good job.

[Asker]

thank you! odds are she prob didn't like it cause she's like that

[FrozenDonkeyWheel]

Lots of cliches, but I guess most people like cliches. So whatever.