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Well, let me answer in two parts:
1 - About the photo:
It is a nice pose and you added some interest to it with the background (same pic, blurred effect). The ray of sun light over your body also added interest.
As suggestions, I think you could add a little more contrast to it as the colours look a little washed out. Also, try this pose smiling a little more (just a little, not necessarily showing your teeth - though a sequence with spontaneuos laughs would do wonders, imho). Other than that, the sun light effects can be really cool when they spot on parts you want to highlight (for example, it is was not on your neck but on your chest or even crossing over your face on just one eye, the effect could be potentially more interesting).
2 - About the model:
Girl, you are very beautiful. 9.5+/10 considering only what is shown. You do have the looks, lass. If you're hearing, I'd say to focus on your inner self (without forgetting the outer one, ofc). Pretend you're not stunning as you are and develop your personality always: be kind, be sexy, be feminine, be strong as much as soft.
Many women who are blessed with great beauty sometimes are trapped by it and turn into poisonous perfect roses. Avoid this, please, and enjoy your life.2