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The white balance in this picture needs to tweaked. Also, it seems to be slightly oversharpened. Plus, too much of the focal point (the face, I would assume is squashed at the top-left of the picture, making it rather top-heavy. And finally, for the love of god could you please crop out the black bars? I'm actually feeling claustrophobic right now.
Overall, I can see some semblance of style in this picture, but I think you should brush up on your basics because ther's a lot of developmental needs here. Photography score 3/10.
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