... Have you Ever?

Have you ever wanted to tie someone down..

Cut them with a razor blade and just watch them bleed?

Watch the blood bubble to the surface in the first fantastic rush and burst of colour...

Then watch as gravity pulls on the blood...

And it searches for the path of least resistance on its journey down..

The little red rivers separating and rejoining..

Matting hair as they go..

Pooling in the bodies hollows before pouring on in its descent..

All the while, their eyes are wild with fear and pain..

Darting this way and that, searching for help, escape, release, hope...

And finding none.

Tears welling to the surface..

Pain, anguish and hopelessness over running them until the tears start to flow down on their own journey..

Searching out their own paths..

And where they intersect the blood..

Diluting it...

Until finally..

You have a mixed puddle of blood and tears on the floor at your feet..

And you don't feel what you thought you would...

Just the familiar emptiness?

...Have you Ever??


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  • Intresting to know how you came up with the idea to write this

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    • I was really upset and angry.

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    • I feel fine right now. well, a little tired.

    • know youc an always contact me when you feel down... don't know if I can make you feel better but who knows

  • Wow this is well written... very descriptive and vividly detailed!

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  • Good but very dark lol.

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    • thank you

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    • Do you ever feel like you are just the tool? a slave to the words?

      Often, I have an emotion, I sit at the keyboard, and it just comes, unbidden.

    • I am a instrument to the art a vessel in which the words flow though, when I write my hand simply moves and the words come to me as if they want to get on the parchment.

      The mark of a true poet is one who has suffered for his craft
      -Phoenix-

  • Very well written and poetic. But still very unsettling. Could be a very controversial poem.

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    • If you look through the other comments, I'd say you're spot on with that assessment.

  • Well I've never cut anyone on purpose so the rest of the sequence of events can't happen

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  • Too much internet for today.

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    • Do you really live in Palestine?

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    • Actually, I'm not really a fan of blood, or violence. But, this came to me, and well, it is powerful.

      People react to it, good and bad.

    • I like it. Keep up the good work. :)

      Aaaaand whenever you need inspiration you know where to look. Jk Jk. xD

  • I have thought about doing this to child molesters, child killers, and all those who are clearly guilty and show no remorse and get off on a technicality.

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  • No, I haven't.

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  • you're mentally ill... seek help.

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  • This was fantastic

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  • Never have I ever

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  • For sure... I for sure do... laugh them in the face while doing so.

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  • Yes I have considered this about myself and others. Yet I'm afraid my fatal flaw is I'm too kind. ☹ Stupid conscience. Not bad, maybe we could compare notes sometime. 😉

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    • I know, right? Damn morals and ethics (no sarcasm... alright, maybe a tiny bit)

  • "And you don't feel what you thought you would... "
    And thus the moment of epiphany smites me, relieving me off my humane burden!

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  • Thank you for reminding me to lock my doors at night.

    By the way, YOU NEED TO SEE A PSYCHOLOGIST ASAP.

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  • No, I haven't. This reading disturbed me. :O

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  • A very descriptive prose, describing in such a distanced and clinical take on life seeping away with that twist at the end that makes you really think, "... familiar emptiness? This person has done this before..."

    The topic itself is disturbing and I don't condone it, but there are poetic and creative skills at play there.

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    • Thank you.

    • No problem... now I need to think about sulphuric acid to clean my mind of any images that might incriminate me..

  • no. but I've thought of shooting people and having dinner while they bleed out. only if they deserve it. but hurting myself? no not really I've wanted to yes but emotionally - no. hurting others like that no i dislike gruesome stuff. who would want to get dirty not me

    i dont like sick things unnatural things, depravity etc sickness

    i like natural, strength, and health

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  • How did you become an administrator?

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    • I'm not an admin.

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    • @Betwyn They sure did. And we got very mad at them. And I thought you had to be nominated first before requesting a position?

    • Back in the day you didn't.

      I honestly don't know about now.

  • FBI is coming for you my sister.

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    • I'm not too worried about them.

      I'm not in their jurisdiction.

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  • Oh lord, this was nice. And like hell I do!
    Are you okay? :(

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  • You need to be in a mental instititution

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  • I can't relate this to this but it was very detailed and well written.
    So many feels !

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  • ... What? Umm, okay...

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  • What the hell is wrong with you? :/

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  • Usually only cut myself...

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  • If you had gone anonymous, I maybe would have thought you were a troll.

    But this is obviously good poetry.

    Great imagery :)

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  • No! That's horrifying.

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    • Thank you for reading it and commenting. It means a lot. :)

  • Some parts, yes. But others are just completely mortifying.

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  • I read that online somewhere was it you

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  • No! I am not a crazy person

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  • Although, it is very well written. Perfect description of a psychopathy in it is full swing...

    I truly hope it is only an artistic taste in dark fantasy genre.

    Although, i personallt dont know you, im hoping you never ever get to this point in your real life... either by exercise of extreme self - control or under a professional supervision.

    And just in a case, going anonymous :)

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    • "And just in a case, going anonymous" LMAO

      Thank you for reading it, and getting it.

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    • Thank you so much :)

    • u re welcome :)

  • I haven't felt this

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  • That was the most demented "poem" I have ever read.

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  • Ummmm... hmmmm... not others no... to myself? Yes. I've thought about hurting my self severly. but Other NO WAY! You need a phsycologist or therapist... i dont care which just one of them... I will lock my doors from here on out...

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  • No I haven't. I am very relieved we don't live by each other...
    maybe lay off the violent media for a while.

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  • I feel like this now... but I cut so meh I'm gonna go cut now this makes me feel like cutting...

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  • Unacceptable and WTF of course I haven't. You must be in huge trouble!!

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  • I have know your soulmate, let me wet your guys up.. www.adventuresinpoortaste.com/.../dexter.jpg

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