Take a listen and tell me your thoughts?

This is my speech to get the role of Head Girl... How does it sound? Would you give me the role? Any tips?
http://vocaroo.com/i/s0e0IxDznCkz

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Thank you!

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Most Helpful Guy

  • *creep mode engaged* I know what you sound like xD

    hahaa but seriously that was good, I would like to advise you to change one thing. instead of saying "if I was head girl I would listen to you, etc etc" I would change it to "as head girl, I would listen to you, etc etc"

    turn it from a possibility into a definitive statement

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What Guys Said 2

  • slow down and blow your nose!

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  • i would vote for u but thats it

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    • Thanks... The teachers have to decide and they're got there favorite pupils so I want my speech to stand out :) Thanks

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