Can you write a 11 sentence tragic love story?

He held her hand, even when it limp, cold like ice.

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I meant 11 word sorry 😑

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  • The pain of the endearing memories stabbed through his aching heart

    The night held stars that seemed as far away as her.

    Basking in the glory of the sweet fond memories of old

    My hand yearned for the gentle touch and warmth of hers

    In another life, I promise to always be there for you

    My happiness drowned in the sadness of her sudden cold body.

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  • And he murmured to her, his voice as dull as a tribesman's trusty cudgel: "Try sitting on it instead for half an hour instead, it's less messy and feels more satisfying. I would know, I've been single a long time."

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  • she kissed him all night and so he discovered he was gay.

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  • Boy meets girl. Boy falls in love. Girl falls in love. Boy and girl kiss. Boy and girl take a walk. Boy and girl walk up a hill. Girl falls off the hill. Boy calls 911. Girl has brain damage and doesn't remember boy. Boy jumps off a bridge. The end.

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  • As she climaxed she scream out "Diego, her boyfriend is Max.

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  • 11 sentence or word?
    If word
    When she held him goodbye, the kiss coughed around the blood

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  • She felt my gloots and didn't orgasm, so I dumped her.

    @consultantisback

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  • Reminds me of Ernest Hemingways "For sale: baby shoes, never worn"

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  • I came to say Romeo and Juliet won the Darwin award.

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  • Ordinary Girl and ______ sitting in a tree, K-I-S-S-I-N-G, then orgy

    lol best I could do

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  • Wife loses voice on Chistmas, receives speak and spell as present.

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  • Once upon a time, there was a man who was a.

    Stupid word limit.

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  • She asked to be buried beside him, they said no?
    Thats ten words

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  • During our marriage ceremony, we exchanged vows but she said no.

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  • probably could though it will take forever lol and most likely suck

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  • Peeling the skin,
    essential oils sprayed,
    scents of citrus engulfed him

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    • reminds me of pablo neruda a bit :p

    • @karahiri I wish! But thank you :) LOL

      You know, I studied him this past summer. I actually like his style quite a bit. Short verses are kind of refreshing, especially when many writers get too wordy.

      Whatever you do, don't read "A Dog Has Died." Major feels from that poem.

What Girls Said 8

  • She sent him a message. I have a challenge for you. Try to avoid talking to me for the next 24 hours, no contact at all. He agreed and waited as the hours passed by. Time seemed endless. Eventually time was up. He messaged her I did it baby. She replied with well done, now do that for the rest of your days. She took her last breath, and with that she was gone. She had been battling an illness for sometime. 2 weeks later he laid bunch of black roses on her grave, with a note saying "I did it baby"

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  • "I love you," she said as her heart beat went still.

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  • I love him so much I cried after years of sadness!

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  • Her words remained unspoken; the course of their lives, forever disjointed.

    BOOM.

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  • Sadness engulfed her as she watched him fall to his death.

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  • If it wasn't for his carelessness, she would still be here.

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  • "I will only talk to you again when we could meet."
    (11 words)

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  • She kissed him, not knowing that this was the last time.

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