What do you think of this phrase?

Ok i wrote this. It made sense in my head and even after I wrote it lol
I like to think of myself as a poetic person. Loved poetry since I was a kid.

"I am a healer because I know what it is like to be broken. How destructive I can be and the pain it brings"

Some liked it.. Others didn't. Just curious of what the rest of the world say :)


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What Guys Said 1

  • aside from using "like" as an adverb, i enjoyed what you've written so far. =]

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    • You did? Yay! I'll fix that lol thatnks for the tip ^-^

    • =] in 4th grade i vividly recall a teacher giving us a list of dead words. "like" was on the top. do ur best to avoid using it whatsoever. in cases of admiration its fine. keep on writing! write lots, and edit more. *waves*

What Girls Said 2

  • it's... interesting. so... you damage yourself. and you heal yourself. kind of contradictory, very human.

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  • relatable. that's all ill say.

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