Just sharing a poem I wrote?

He loves me
I drop a petal
watch it sink
float away
with the wind
like your love
he loves me not

I mean feel free to share your thoughts !


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  • Beautiful, like a leaf blowing away from its plant, everything ends, everything leaves, even love blows away in the wind.

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  • that doesn't even scan

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    • what do you mean, sexyphil?

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    • oh yes I know that but this was more of a little small than an actual rhyming poem. I wrote this in a few seconds so didn't have time to rhyme, but I also write actual poems too :)

    • Ok just seemed odd to me

  • I'm confused...

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  • worst poem in the history of poems. i wrote better at 4th grade... .

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    • what exactly didn't u like? feel free to share your poems :)

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    • just because it has emotions poured in it it doesn't mean its art. the classics would shiver.

      here is the problem of modern "art":

      https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ANA8SI_KvqI

    • Poetry is a form of expression, some of the best poems have hardly any words to them, don't be an asshole, she is expressing her pain and you just shit on her.. you are a dumb fuck!

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