Can anyone fix this grammar?

When you grew as a simple woman and trying to a make-up by yourself


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Most Helpful Guy

  • There is supposed to be a comma before and? Add are after and? That's all I got.

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Most Helpful Girl

  • when you grow up as a simple woman trying to make up by your self

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What Guys Said 1

  • Learning how to apply make up, was difficult growing up as a simple woman.

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What Girls Said 2

  • When you grew up as a simple woman trying to learn how to apply makeup

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  • When you have grown up as a simple woman, and are trying to do makeup by yourself.

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