Have you ever written a song?

If so, please share. Today, I wrote a rap song to express my current sadness, things haven't been going very well for me lately. Its called "Rough Cuts" (My crappiest first song ever)

Sometimes, I ask myself if this is really worth it

Takin’ a life for no other good purpose

You know my knife is dull but that doesn’t mean a thing

Rough cuts and rust can still make you sting

This life is in no way worth a thing

I know it’s hard sometimes but you can still be a king

It’ll take awhile to get on your feet

Together, we can still be levitating off the street

Maybe daddy was right, fighting myself I will always lose

Even booze, and drugs won’t help us snooze

Young and dumb, I might as well take a bite

Broken teeth, bruised cheeks, with sobs and weeps

Cuts so deep, my blood went dry

Difficult to find ourselves, but we might as well try

Inspirationless, no motivation or determination

Could have givin’ up, but I still have my dedication

Dug in a hole so deep, beneath my family

Wished I would wind up in a cemetery

Blood and brains, guts is still a vision of my soul, It’s still scary

I wouldn’t know if god is really real

Not sure if I want to see the devil, but hell, I might as well

You know the quiet ones have the longest story

Ask yourself if it’s worth the century

Thats right, I may have learned a thing or two

But the wise have a larger disguise

Hiding the bloody tears,

Yeah, I know

We have a life ahead of ourselves,

Is this really worth it?

(Yeah, I didn’t think so)



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Most Helpful Girl

  • I loved writing as a hobby.
    When I was your age, I wrote a lot of songs and even sang them (because I had a voice).
    I just wrote a myTake that is somewhat lyrical www.girlsaskguys.com/.../a32293-why-i-am-tired-of-humanity
    I didn't intend it to be that way, but sometimes writing as a way of forming itself as you brainstorm.

    I read yours *Hugs* You have your whole life ahead of you.
    As cliche as this sounds, things will get better.
    You are in control and have the ability to turn things around.
    It starts with you , and reaching out for help to aid in the process of getting better (mentally).

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Most Helpful Guy

  • Yes about myself in my head it's all in my head

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What Girls Said 2

  • Yap, I have. I even came up with the beat for it on my drum set.

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  • Yes but I'm not sharing them

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What Guys Said 3

  • Yes, but they're mostly either instrumental or quite personal.

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  • Singing is the very last thing I intend to do, right behind dancing.

    Your's seemd fine tho.

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  • That was good

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