Do you like this poem?

brake her down

until she's nothing

twist her heart

around your little finger

give her love

so you can take it away

give her water so she can live

then make her wish she would die

give her hope

so she can grow

then break her down

again

until she's nothing

but she never was anything to you

thanks so much! :) XD


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  • Not sure. Rage, anger, etc. is fine in poems I think. But for some reason it comes off as being crazy ex-girlfriend and stuff like that. So I'm not real sure what I think of it.

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  • Change all the masculine pronouns to feminine and change all the feminine pronouns to masculine and it would make more sense.

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  • cool =P

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