Most Helpful Girl
Yes not believable. Its fine if you say you're looking for something serious. But saying you want to fall in love makes it look like you copied it off a cheesy novel. It also makes you sound desperate. Online dating is about having fun. There are at least hundreds of options depending where a girl lives. So keep it light and simple and let the girls know that you're the kind of guy who has his options open and won't try to be desperate n clingy right away and be that kind of guy when a girl messages or meets up with you.