I wrote a verse for a woman and I have written of similar nature previously as well but since her bday she seemed to have become cold and distance?

It's your birthday my princess
It is your birthday o pure one!
The day has finally arrived
The day when none of your whim or fancy shall be denied
The day when I wish I was near you
The day when we both embark upon some rendezvous
The day when you might be surrounded by people none like you
The day when I shall be thinking of none but only you

It's your birthday my princess
It is your birthday o pure one!
There are times when a person feels lost and life seems grim
None but few know it is your first birthday without him
For I shall not utter his name not because he is voldemort
But to leave a woman so fine as you one ought to be tried in a criminal court
I hope that line brought the curve across your face
The curve that straight away sends me to outer space

It's your birthday my princess
It is your birthday o pure one!
I wish to keep you happy all life long
I wish to be the shoulder that you can cry upon
This time and distance can't keep us apart
For you are the soul that is always close to this heart
I dream when we shall again walk alongside
Where your simplicity leaves me completely mystified

It's your birthday my princess
It is your birthday o pure one!
On this occasion I know I can't be present
But I have sent something that I hope you find pleasant
Don't heed what people say of me
For they don't know how enchanting you are upon me
I wish to proceed further to speak my heart
But my words might betray me, sweetheart
It's your birthday my princess
It is your birthday o pure one!

Now since you have read so much. I request you indulge me a bit further. I also gifted her a chocolate frame of her photograph. But I expected us to grow close together but she is growing further apart and can't imagine why? Could you please tell me why after such a warm gesture could someone proceed with such disdain?


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Most Helpful Girl

  • Okay, what is your relationship with her? If she is not your girlfriend/fiance/wife do NOT send her that.

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  • Was she madly in love with you when you gave her this? This is very heavy, unless she was already crazy about you, she would have found it creepy. And also it depends on her personality, some girls will find things like that incredibly cringey.

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