If I gave this poem to you, would you marry me?

You can be the cheese,
and I'll be your noodle.
You can be the peaches,
and I'll be your cream.
You can be the sneeze,
and I'll be your sniffle.
You can be the ball,
and I'll be your wiffle.
You can be the laugh,
and I'll be your tickle.
You can be the lips,
and I'll be your whistle.
You can be the dance,
and I'll be your shuffle.
You can be my wife,
and I'll be the guy
spending the rest of his life
wondering why a girl such as you
would like me too.


Most Helpful Girl

  • Hahahaha I would cause you are sooo funny


Most Helpful Guy

  • Me personally, no. I don't know you and I'm not into guys. But I do like the poem


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What Guys Said 2

  • Got bored after the noodle part.

  • No cuz it's too long. brevity is the soul of wit.

    • I agree. I'm of the opinion no poem should be longer than a cigarette. Not much I can do about it though. Once a poem is written, it's done.

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