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Not bad at all. I've heard POF sucks, though. I used Match.com and was pretty happy with it. It costs, but it was worth it.
You might try to take a photo that isn't so pixelated and dimly lit, though. Your photos aren't bad looking, but something taken with an actual camera outside of a webcam/cell phone would let your good features show better. It looks like you have pretty eyes ... don't be afraid to show them!
Also, you might mention a bit more about your interests, so potential matches can see the kinds of things that make you happy.
Last, I don't care too much about small grammar corrections, but some people do get the wrong idea if you have them in your profile:
"Yeah, physical attraction is important to" ... should be "too."1THIS IS NOT RELEVANT ANYMORE