It's a recruitment admin position
Then I'd suggest making sure your writing is grammatically correct. It's not just like writing on here.
@BillHe1 it's generally good
@BillHe1 I haven't started working yet.
Just an Old Fart's opinion.
@BillHe1 I value it if you have some experience with what I am asking
What if it was formal
Some commas here and there? I’m not sure anyone’s really going to notice,
It was a short sentence, so yes, they do notice
So do you think it would be a problem?
I’ve answered the question twice now. I’ve said no. Both times.
OK it just wasn't clear
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No, I doubt they will fire you, just be careful in the future. Interns always make mistakes