Not bad... Still I think it's too messy though. No flow...
I messed up toward the end. I like about :45-1:30
Wasn't talking about that. I was talking about the structure and form. Better than last one though I think.
Well, im using a moble device to do all of this so... i dont have all the proper tools.
It's not about the tools lol. It's about the form and composition of a song. A song needs something to captivate the listener and that would be the melody. I think the melody isn't strong that is all.
Well, i didn't make the song. It is a combination of two songs played at once
Oh. Well still I can't say I really like it. Just layering sounds doesn't really work for me I think. I prefer original mixes but not bad.
Okay, that is what my brother says, too much going on.
Xactly. Would you mind listening to my SC though? Might give you a couple ideas on melody etc.
Shure, what is it. I can follow you too
Check on profile. I'm on phone so I can't copy paste right now. But I think it will give you a few good ideas to get you on the right track.
Sorry. I could only handle 50 seconds. No flow. No hook.
Okay, i agree it takes a while to build up.
Good luck with it. You've got potential.
I think so too
Have an opinion?
@APRU5 i think your so talented
Thanks, but i know its kinda messy
Its perfect like you
If you say so, i know i couod have done better though.
Ow I see
Give me some e.
That's good keep up the good work
Dont care for it...
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