Most Helpful Guy
I can't really comment on the music itself because I don't listen to that style of music. Therefore, I'm not a good judge of that.
However, from a mixing/mastering standpoint, I would suggest making the vocal line more clear. It was very difficult to hear it and understand what you were saying simply because it was covered up underneath the piano and such. Like a little past 2 minutes, I heard there was vocals, but it wasn't loud enough to understand what you were saying.
Besides the vocals being way too quiet, I thought the mixing of it in general was good. :D
Most Helpful Girl
I didn't get the notification for this, I just saw it in the 'reported question' section. Not sure why it's been reported :/.
It's not the kind of music I listen to but it's good.