Black lips and thigh highs
Suicide you've tried
But all you want is to stay alive
This is hard I know
Its like running barefoot through snow
It will get better
witch is why I am writing this letter
Like a stray dog
Looking for love
Love will be right in front of you
Focuse on that too
There is no need to neglect your sorrow
Maybe it will be gone by tomorrow!
As your happy thoughts dwindle
And your mind will kindl
Your depressed mind
It is thinking all the time open your eyes
And stop feeding your lies
Most Helpful Girl
Lol, this poem is sh*t. Thank Gawd my emo high school days are gone. One day, you’ll be in your 20’s and you and your friends will be looking back at your not so great emo poems that you probably think are special right now as a teen and laughing.
*which not ‘witch’. Witch is the female who flies around on her broom. :/
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Most Helpful Guy
Honestly sounds like an edgy teen trying to sound deep, also the structure would do better in stanzas with enjambment (since there's no punctuation) you should add punctuation though.