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I like it but it could use a few tweaks.
Is the piano a midi instrument? I don't know maybe it is just my imagination lol. I just think it sounds verrrry stiff and electronic/robotic at 1:24 in my opinion. If it is a midi instrument, there are some things you can do to make it sound more human. I can try and describe them to you if it actually is a midi.
Also, something that would make your video a lot more interesting is if you put something to watch with it. It could be you singing, playing piano, hanging out with friends, making a snowman in black white filters, whatever. It would help it make it more interesting for sure. Otherwise, it's very easy for a viewer to just skip through it and listen to only certain parts.
I would also put the voice slightly louder (or the piano a touch more quiet).
Also in my opinion, it could use a little more reverb on the piano. by the way, is the reverb on the vocals on a bus or directly on the voice? Putting reverb on a bus vs directly could help make it more clear.
Also, there are about 30 seconds of black silence at the end that should probably be edited out.
So basically, I think you have the voice, you just need to work on the editing of it in your DAW (your recording program) and the video side of things. I can show you if you need help with it.
Go ahead and put it on youtube though-- I just suggest making the changes to it first.