What you think ? Is it OK?

When the sun is about to set,
And stars can't hold to shine ,
When the sky isn't bright,
Also I can't see the darkness,
When my shadows are vanished,
And I can't hear any voices, coz I'm busy seeing some beautiful colours in the sky,
Which I don't see on shops,
I'm enjoying but I feel bad ,
When I think about people busy in their work,
That's the time I feel lucky
And blessed


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What Girls Said 1

  • it's alright, just drop the slang 👌

    • My eng. Isn't good enough
      I just manage to write somehow😂

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