I've been doing these portraits and stuff for free for a long time. but I'm tryna see if how I can turn my talent into money.
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Since you asked for opinions, I'll give it straight amd be honest.
They're alright, but they aren't great. That is, I may look at em and say, "hey not bad, keep it up" but I wouldn't truly consider buying them. I honestly think they have room to grow. Some of the proportions are a bit off, and it may help if you pay a bit more focus on the details/shading.
They're not bad, but I wouldn't pay for yours if I can get someone else's people-portraits that are better for the same or cheaper. They're better than a lot of amateur artists, but if I'm paying for art, I'm looking for a professional.
Likewise, the style isn't particularly unique. I've seen many portraits of people before in pencil or whatnot, and I've seen them with a similar style too. They look more like something out of an art class rather than a professional, if that makes sense.
I think it would make your art more sellable if you had a unique position. I'm not saying to go off the deep end and abstract, but maybe add some interesting colors to them. Try different mediums. Do something other than people once in awhile. Just experiment until you find your own shtick... Or be inspired by another artist's style and try it out for yourself and make it your own.
I. e. Chuck Close. He does portraits from little squares or circles and makes a portrait out of them. The proportions all look right on his portraits, and his style is super unique. Thus, they are sellable.