Hey guys, what do you think of this poem?

I wrote this poem yesterday, tell me what do you think.

We all are in the same boat
Unaware of each other
Straining each other with guilts
Which chokes us and forces us
To shut down from the outer world
And raise out guards
Not to protect our soul
From the monsters of the world
But to cage the devil that lies
Within the Castle of our bones.

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  • It's better than anything I ever wrote.

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    • Thank you!
      Care to share your poems?

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    • Its really beautiful. I like it!

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  • Love it, I don’t really know much about poetry, but I like it so much

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  • Meh, reads sorta awkwardly for poetry I think but different strokes for different blokes amirite

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    • Modern poetry doesn't have rhymes. Its more like story telling but has depth of poetry.

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    • Very few modern poets read well in my opinion though. Rhyming or not, it usually reads like they are trying to hard

    • Okay i appreciate your opinion

  • Pretty good the devil within the castle of our bones I like that

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  • That was sweeet

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  • Really good

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