What do you think of these two poems I've written?

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I wince
at the cringe
of the furries insane whinge

Its a sin
the spin
of all those 'otherkin'

I'd have a drink with Bender
until he came out as
greygender

I thought I hated that I'd never
'had a pony'
until I met
the sex fiends who call themselves
each
'brony'

Conformity was never in itself, a virtue
but it hardly has better advertisement than
in deviants
who just do it wrong.

Never:

My role models,

a civil rights leader with a dream who'd had enough
a comic who really knew his 'stuff'
a drunken Santa Claus with a heart too big for a mall
a man worth his weight in Salk
a mellow rasta who loved the birds
a poet more beast than beauty, by the Buk
a godless, amazing soul
a socialist sonnuv'a Pole
a man of capital, with a list
a man of many ventures, & no parties
a lady of song, logic, & beauty from glen to Glenn
a scientist who wraps, but was never one to beat
a Paul whose feat was never to brawl

never will my
hopes,
for what they've done
fall.
  • They are bad, & you should feel bad.
    Vote A
  • I like the first one.
    Vote B
  • I like the second one.
    Vote C
  • Meh, they are mediocre.
    Vote D
  • Tl;Dr.
    Vote E
  • As an otherkin self identified greygender robot with bestial sexual tendencies, I want a pony much more than you (& fack u btw).
    Vote F
  • I enjoyed them both.
    Vote G
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  • Bender the greygender. That sounds epic.

    The rhymes are cool, and I genuinely laughed... I still disagree with what I think is your message though haha

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