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Nope i love it, i used to make music myself, it is however too short. Did you sing this yourself too? If you did Get urself a metronome as well because some of the singing is a little faster at times when it should have stayed balanced. Also sony sound forge or music morpher gold would help you erase the breaths between verse and make/add a melody to it. Lyrics were touching and pleasent good job on the writing!