Good title for my song?

Verse 1:
The way you looked at me when you left
Broke me just enough for me to stay
Then I saw your true colours
And there’s nothing left for me to lose

Chorus:
I tried to keep you from hurt
But ended up hurting myself
So I had to let you go
And hurt you one last time

Verse 2:
The way you spoke to me when you left
Was enough to keep me close
Then I heard all of your lies
And I can’t make you change your ways

Chorus

Verse 3:
The way played me when you left
Made me feel like it was all my fault
Then I found out who you are
And I wish I could take back all our days

Chorus

Bridge:
I picked you up when you were down then you push me away
I did everything for you, and you don’t know what to say
I was blind but now I see why people say things about you
How can I give anymore when there’s nothing to give for?

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  • Wow that's a great song.
    I think you should title it " Broken pieces"

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    • Hmm... I added "I said I loved you, now I'm taking it back" to the end of the bridge... so maybe Taking it Back?

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  • “Let you go” ?

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  • One last time?

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    • Hmm... I added "I said I loved you, now I'm taking it back" to the end of the bridge... so maybe Taking it Back?

  • "Hurt" maybe?
    Most songs are named after some word (s) in the chorus so

    (Not all of them are tho)

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    • Hmm... I added "I said I loved you, now I'm taking it back" to the end of the bridge... so maybe Taking it Back?

    • Yea that sounds better than hurt 👍

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