What do you think of my poem?

Below The Fray

Tragic, that we commit to who we are

no matter what

in the gut

feeling above the fray

Many a men,

the Titanic, refusing to see their iceberg

straight away

I like to think myself maleable,

to go with the flow is better

For the spirit of the law breathes

whereas only sits there

does the letter

The identity i’ve crafted

over time




can only keep one person awake for so long

Constant improvement

creates critical acclaim

yet in stasis

we lose movement

in the overfocus

of our aim

I want to know why evidence is relevant

not believe I have what I need

just to fall

I want to believe what’s right is fluid

I get thirsty, after all.
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