I wrote this? How's it 😊?

Well I am leaving the school I was in and I will be taking admission in a new school.
Being nostalgic... I ended up with this! 😊❀

The last two years have made me believe
That time flies actually
The faces which seemed too new to me
Are now a part of my life undeniably
These people with whom I've spent so many months
Yet each moment so unforgettable
Make me laugh and cry at the same time
They have all shed a light to shape my life
I may not be able to explain what my heart feels
But I don't care because all of ours beat similarly
All of us being so incredibly unique
Are tied by the bonds of love eternally
Those golden days passed with ticking time
The end would come so soon, we never did realise
For together we have walked a thousand miles
Shared those laughs, tears of joy and the endless smiles
I know after this we are forever together
Through the ups and downs we'll fly no Matter
For distance doesn't define separation
Our hearts will never feel the alienation
For With you I've learnt to feel alive
Smiles never fading even through the hardest times
And now when I stop to see our journey
These feelings rush back to me very strongly
That the last two years have made me believe
That time flies actually
The faces which seemed too new to me
Are all a part of my life undeniably!

I hope you like it!😊

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  • It's nice I liked it. πŸ‘Œ
    Have one suggestion for you - trying repeating words like "the, that, these" less often.
    (So that.. Your poem would have a distinct appeal and would sound more prudent.)

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