What do you guys think of my story so far?

what things should I add or take away?

bandit's of the underground

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What Guys Said 1

  • I like it so far. If you haven't done so already, I would plan out the whole story out before writing more. If you don't plan what you're gonna writing, it could give the impression that you're just making up random stuff as you go along. Make everything have a purpose in the story. Also, there are a few mechanic issues, but that's not that big of a deal, since it's probably only a rough draft.

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What Girls Said 1

  • You should expand on the relationship between Tessa and Randall.

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