What do you think of my story so far (updated)?

What do you think of my story so far (updated)?What do you think of my story so far (updated)?What do you think of my story so far (updated)?

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  • I don't get it on the quick transition from appearing the body bag that have strength. To the white room. We don't know the main character's name yet.

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What Guys Said 2

  • Are u a writer? Is it a story? Or a biography?

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    • No it's just a story I'm working on

    • Whats it about? And Tbh. U could add more practical things to make it more fun to read. Coz uve added soo many things a person is feeling that doesn't really happen in real life. Its only in anime that a person can have soo many thoughts in an instant.

  • It's getting better

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What Girls Said 2

  • Great

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  • It's pretty good, keep going

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