Tell me what you honestly think of my poem crushed?

I hope you like my poem? I hope to get feed back on this.
-Crushed-
Crushed, Crushed, Crushed, I'm so Crushed, My Blood Sweat and Tears, Seems to be real, Why can't I feel? What is the deal? Why can't my heart feel? isn't it real? Numb is all I get? Am I to be so dumb? Like a Speckle and Crumb? How am I to
be Brave? When all I feel is the grave, I feel it calling me, Why can't I find my Mind? Why do all the winds grind me to nothing? Why does Pain come in like the flood? Why does my Blood? Does anyone Care? Where did all my friends go? Do they know that my Blood boils in my veins as I am in pain? Crushed, Crushed, Crushed, My head is stuck in the mud and the gunk, Id rather be dead than to feel this pain, Im so Crushed, Crushed, Crushed,
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I wrote this before Cardi B was msin stream
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main sorry
Tell me what you honestly think of my poem crushed?
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