Can I have your opinions of my music?

I've been using my excessive free time to make this. I just finished it today.

What are your thoughts? I know it's extremely low budget.

https://youtu.be/mm9qDOsf4Io
Updates:
6 mo
Hi thank you all for your opinions. I listened to it after waking up, so I had some fresh ears. I think that after that and reading your suggestions I've decided I'm a little dissatisfied with the final song. I'm going to put some tweaks on it and give another update. It'll be here if y'all care to hear it again. Thanks again.
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