Most Helpful Guy
I don't like the outfit. The sweater thing inside is okay, but the dress and working boots don't look very good in my opinion. I thinks some blue denim jeans and some converse or sneakers would look better to the sweater. This outfit screams both the 90s and has a not so mature look over it. Dungaree pants and dresses isn't my cup of tea.
Most Helpful Girl
Too 90's feeling, but trying too hard at it... Not my thing, but it's not horrible. Maybe better shoes would make it a better looking outfit, also, I'd exchange that dress for the same one only in a pastel color and in suede...
But that's just me. xD
*Maybe shoes like these:
*Maybe this sort of a dungaree dress:
I like the idea of your outfit, but I'd upgrade it with these options. =)