Can you read my poem and tell me what you think... Probably terrible... My first try?

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I am passion

I am dreams

I am a man who never gives up

I am hope

I feel desire

I am a man who just needs love

She is a miracle

She is heaven

She is the soul that saved the unsavable

She is strong

But she is blind

Blind to the grace that befallen her

For if there was anyone on this earth id choose

You know what? It would have to be YOU!!!
Can you read my poem and tell me what you think... Probably terrible... My first try?
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