Is this good poetry about a girl i'm dating? Girls how would you react if your boyfriend made a poem like this about you?

Your beautiful brown eyes are windows into your kind hearted and beautiful soul, and i could look into them forever.
Your smile is so warm and sweet it takes away all my negative feelings and makes me feel warm inside.
You are so beautiful inside and out that you brighten up a room when you walk in, even if my day has been dark.
You are my queen, you are my heart, you are my world? You are the light of my life.

  • Cheesy, she would hate it.
    Vote A
  • Good poem your girl would like that.
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  • Cheesy but a girl would like it.
    Vote C
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  • it's beautiful :)


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