Its not finished yet, but what do you think of it? All opinions welcome and any suggestions will be taken!
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Those are some sweet action poses! Really though, nice delivery with them. And good use of foreshortening. Proportions are awesome, and you did a really ambitious idea. I'm not sure what your medium was; it kinda looks like crayon or colored pencil. I like your style, it's pretty crisp and pseudo-vector like (with your cel shading and such).
If it doesn't impede upon your style, I would suggest somehow making clearer the discontinuity between some of the elements. For example, the logo on the black knight's armor is a bit un-crisp. Maybe you could outline it in some red or white color or something? I don't know. I just feel like some elements aren't as defined or clear. The water could use a bit more texture and realism to it.
Other than that, great job!! Keep going, you're really doing great!1