So I posted this yesterday and you guys really helped! I made some changes. I set it to a more traditional 3 quatrains and a couplet, with an ABABCDCDEFEFGG rhyme scheme.
Would love to hear your thoughts!
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Tbh, I couldn't get past the first stanza but only because your writing wasn't
my personal style... no other reason.