Here's my poem that I wrote when I was 10 years old. Is it good for a ten year old to write?

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I was just a kid my teachers weren't the ones who teached me so it might be bad(I think it bad) the name is I FELL IN LOVE WITH YOU WHEN I FIRST MET YOU. hope you like it okey here it goes.

"When I first saw your eyes.I felt so alive

When I first saw your face my heart was

filled with love.When I first saw your smile

I felt clean and strong.When I first saw you

I fell in love with you."

So what do you think about my childhood poem I just need a honest answer (its okey when you think it not good)it was just a poem when I was 10 year old.My first crush.
Here's my poem that I wrote when I was 10 years old. Is it good for a ten year old to write?
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