So it was in the bus I was getting out from work... I was usually sitting in the back of the bus assuring my safety with a hand grabed from a pole up high. At a certain station a girl in a plaid skirt comes in the bus. I look her in the eyes, her face is so innocent yet her eyes are dark and so is her hair... she comes close to me that I can feel her parfume... I feel an attraction to her and I close a bit more... you can hear the brakes of the bus and she in a involuntary way stumbles upon me and she can feel the boner that grew for her she smiles shily but does not move away from me just getting close and far away from my boner teasing me.
Oh my... if your girlfriend found out.. you're dead. 3/10
What girlfriend? She just enjoyed it... teasing me for the whole ride
If your girlfriend were with you and the stranger girl and you happened to be in that way. You're already dead.
Well what better way to die then with a boner?
Die in sleep..😂 I mean your girlfriend might kill you in that bus
Mayube i just get so horny that i cum in my pants or maybe I just can't help it and be so horny that I begin to lick her and her pussy becomes a portal to another dimension
Your fantasy is pretty scary
Just because... I can't explain more. Hmm
Well are you limited by words or vocabulary or why you can't explain?
"maybe I just can't help it and be so horny that I begin to lick her and her pussy becomes a portal to another dimension" How could you imagine in that way? And towards a stranger? It's creepy!
Maybe it is creepy maybe she just wants it since she stumbles upon me so many times in her plaid skirt giving me sensual looks under her glasses.
She's cheap. So she likes it ofc
She is just sexy and she knows it... she knows she can corrupt anybody anywhere to desiree her
Fair enough. Pervert guy.
I just love geeks in plaid skirts... and I guees I am awfully horny too since I did not masturbate in such a long time... in other circumstances I would surely make stories about flying pandas polenizing the flowers from planet B103 or something.
Yeah I know right...
That is how it is when you are finding yourself in a weird spot between innocence and desiree...
But still it's not appropriate
Well I was thinking like you... like 10 years ago but I have changed :) also actually the bus thingie is real... a woman really did that to me.
Well she turned you into pervert guy.. I feel pity.
No actually those are a lot more womens thtat came after her... one who was raped and was obsessed with sex and making me cum... and other who was just obsessed with sex and made me fuck her until she could barely walk...
No wonder you're single...
what do you mean?
I'm guessing that you are single.
Yes but why no wonder?
Because the chicks are only want to use your body for a temporary.
I can't really agree on that since I had 1-2-3 years realationships.
That's short term
Well it is if you look at soulmates.
I'm not looking for soulmate. Soulmate is a term of obsession.. I'm looking for loyal
Do you consider yourselfa loyal person?
Doesn't loyality comes with marriage? Do you think you are able to marry?
Well you are surely one of the few out there... or it feels like that.
If he's loyal, I would be loyal. If he's not. I'll make sure he's living in hell after this.
Hmm... what about if you make a promise with him... and he agrees you can kill him if he is not loyal?
Oh. You give me a good idea.! I like it
Well I like that ideea too... it gives a sense of belonging... and also the thought that someone could love me so much that she would kill me if I am unfaithfull is nice.
I'm tired dealing with unfaithful guys
I am tired of dealing with superficial womens who are not ready for a strong and serious relationship...
It's because you're fuckable guy to every woman.😂
I am actually quite cute and innocent and I am surely not fuckable to every women but the smart ones do feel the need to use me usually.
Stop denying it. Earlier you said you fucked every girls. Now denying.
Not really... I just do it with the nerdy ones and usually they were the ones on top.
And if you really want to read something interesting read Roadside Picnic.
Sigh. Now you're half admitting that
Well not really I am just saying some girls would disgust me and I would never even look at them. As well as some really beautiful girls psyhically speaking can disgust me if I do not connect with someone for me it is 0... and I do seem to connect with psychos actually.
Hmm.. I don't know what to say
It is fine you do not need to say anything :) people can be very complex surely a few lines can't tell a lot about a person.
You could join Elliquiy. It’s a site where people do exactly that. They have adult & non-adult stories and role plays, solo, paired, and in groups. It’s private and there is an evaluation period to weed out creeps. There are a lot of talented writers.www.elliquiy.com
Thank you but the site looks old..:( it looks less fun
From my wattpad; https://www.wattpad.com/user/DanielleBuckroyd
Damn that is sensual!
Hmm.. it was okay overall..5/10 :)
Thank you, feel free to read my other stuff on wattpad if your ever bored lol
You're welcome. I will read someday 😌
Kinda hard to believe there was no rape or violence in it, especially since a girl posted it. I didn't know girls liked sensual sex.
Many girls like sensual sex lol
Well sensual sex is certainly not the top female fantasy..
@aa180 it's a top female fantasy actually
Um, no, the top female fantasy is rape.I wish it was sensual sex, that would have been so much better.
Even rough sex can be sensual. The definition of sensual is relating to or involving gratification of the senses and physical, especially sexual, pleasure. So any sex, that the people enjoy, would be sensual. Maybe the word your looking for is soft sex or vanilla.
Well then that
I'm on wattpad. What is your story called?
The story in the pictures is called Christmas gift, it's in the short stories. I have a lot more stories on my page, the link is in my orginal comment
Have an opinion?
Kinky one? Sure.There was a boy. There was a girl. Guy put pee pee in skiddlyboop. Girl we’re like oooh. Guy wor like oooooh. Girl we’re like oooooooooohh, boy we’re like oooooooooooooooooooooohhhh. Then girl we’re like let’s be freaky. So they both drank bleach and dieded.The end.
🙄 I made funny comment.. suppose to be for you but I put it in my own hole. Ffs
😕 whatta.. the story isn't fun
It’s in the wrong hole 🙄 it’s meant to be a reply to other dudes story. I suck at gag tonight
4000 characters is too short. Here's one I published on Literotica.literotica.com/.../tam-gets-licked-for-her-first-time
Around 16,000 characters.
Why I can't open the link
May be a login problem. I also posted it here.
cut the extra space the dot
Weird.. i. can't open the link. Seems like my phone doesn't let me read something erotic and even watch porn
I'm not a troll or predator. I'll post it in consecutive PM's.
Try an incognito window in chrome.
I tried.. and it didn't work. I even tried to get into hubporn. And I can't access that too
PM me and I'll post it in consecutive messages... and won't stalk you.
Oh my... finally I can open the link. I'm going to read it tomorrow. Xd
Should be fun. Semi true story just dressed up a bit
I'm. done reading it... *-*...*speechless* ...*my heart skips a beat* it was superb! 9/10 i like it. I part after climax to the ending. From beginning to the climax was like okay...4/10
And I shared these link to my bestie. And she couldn't open the link either. I told her try to open many times. Xddd and now i got a label as "pervert" from her..
I am not clear about what you mean. Part was good. Part not so much. If there was a part that was weak, tell me. I can edit it.
Climax is a sex part. Climax part was too long. I mean you explained it too detailed.. probably I don't feel that much.. but when climax part almost end... I started to like the story until the ending. Weak part is from beginning part of story until climax part.. I mean it's pretty boring. Hmm.. by the way no need to fix it. You should continue writing this story. Try to make chapter 2. 😏
The long boring intro was to create an upscale setting for the story.
It doesn't necessarily mean to be boring. You can make it funny. Probably you're too serious when writing this story. Hmm... When you'll write the next chapter? *-* or do you have any other story?
I have another one up but it is fetish/kink. Not a "nice" story.I don't have an outline for a sequel for Tam. Especially given your unique approach to things, hearing suggestions could lead me into something.
Why it's not nice a "story"? But I want the guy character being the main... because you were focused on him. So you should have an outline for a sequel for him. Not tam. He was only interested in Tam. He could change his feelings towards other girl. 🤷 Or keep his feelings towards tam.
I don't really have any short stories, as a writer I don't think I'm capable of making a story shorter than it already is 😂
You could summarize it 😏
Mmmm I could, it's not a naughty story though 😋
That's fine 😌
It begins set in the year 2544, humanity has evolved to move beyond Earth and has set out amongst the stars. The whole planet united under the federation of Earth with the intention of creating this solar empire. A team of seven soldiers are federations elite team, each different in unique but able to come together to form an effective and determined force. Whilst at war with a species that has sworn to kill them, this elite team must protect the empire at all costs whilst at the same time exploring another possible eny of unknown origin. With only each other and their skills to work with, these seven soldiers will be pushed to the limit in a bid to save their home from destruction and potentially, the entire human race.
Hmmmm I don't know how to rate this... it's like human revolution..
Lol, it's entirely up to you.
It's good tho :)
Glad you like it 🙂
Do you write love story?
I can write them yeah, I just don't do it very often
George Bush did 9/11 and there was never a moon landing.
😣🤦 please redo. Writing something else
Zuck me ballz kunt.
Nope. Won't happen
There is my brother named dick He always wants to stand and he never sits 😍 😂 Yes, I love my brother His standing position makes many girls awe... He's 5'9 inches
That made you laugh and you're rating just 3?
Because it's not a great story. It's a little bit funny
So, I can make a great story if explain what is great for you
Write 500 words at least. And I'll consider giving you high mark.
PM me and I'll give you a story of 1000 words for sure
You can write 1k words over here 😌 no need to pm me
I'd like to ask you many questions... That's the reason
Ask over here
Could you please answer my question on my profile?
Done.. I said none
I don't know about short stories, but i could write a few songs but for that i should know u first😂😂
I won't accept song. It should be story. 😂
I like how you started dirty then ended really cleanly. I give a 7
? I don't get it
Once upon a time in a far away land There lived a dog His name was rover And the story is over !!
U didn't say how short 😂😂
Short stories usually 500 words..🤦
Cool I'll keep it in mind next time
Sigh. Redo now
I'm lazy and don't wanna think I'll see later in the day I'll pm you
Sorry, I have a life and don’t spend that long on this site.
I used to write short stories. I do like it. so you can send a pm
I can't pm you... you set the acc into private
wait I will fix it.
check it again
I can't send pm to you bcz of my xper level
send a message me. we can talk. i can send you videos
What videos? 😂I want to read your short story. And I wonder how good are you at writing
How nasty it is
Your video? 😂
You'll know who's me 😂
Actually we are messaging rn
you fucked my brain
Once upon a time.stuff happened.The end.
1/10 sigh... Please redo
Once upon a time.Lots of stuff happened.The end.
Inbox me I'll make the river flow
You can make river flow over here..😒
WILL U PAY ME? HAHAHA
Ur points on gag must be low if u are this bored and don't want to shoot for master here. Hahaha
Hmm... my point is around 3.8k lol. And I'm new here.. I don't have any intention to shoot for master 😂
No. You're welcome to read some of my erotica on literorica, but im not writing a story just for you, pink anon.
Well then you shouldn't write this in the first place. Or are you afraid that I would give you low mark? 😏
As I said, you're welcome to read it. I'll send you a link. I'm just not writing a story just for you. The mark you may or may not give me is irrelevant.
Why is that funny? Jesus Christ, maybe you shouldn't be reading stuff written for adults
Why I can't read?
You didn't answer my question
The mark I'll give will be relevant on how good the storyline is..😒
I mean that your mark (whether positive or negative) isn't a reason as to why I wouldn't write you a personal story.As I already said, you're welcome to read them and mark them however you like. My point was that I don't actually care whether you mark it positively or negatively.
Ok. I get it
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